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Saturday 21 August 2010

Mulling things over

I have been thinking and vsiiting other blogs lately and although l like the idea of different endings l think l have a problem with the length of my story.

I think its too long and a little boring.
I know because I cant be bothered reading it! and if l cant then who will?

Maybe I need to break it up with more images or even me reading the story as an audio add on.

Its good to mull things over.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Barbara,

    I don't think that your story is boring at all, but I do think that an audio file of you reading it would be brilliant! Let me know if you need any help with it.

    Elaine

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  2. Thanks Elaine that sounds good to me..

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